My Favorite Place
The sun shines, the clouds smoothly drift, and the oceans motions are soundless. Few people walk the warm, tan sand, but the birds wander timelessly. Something makes it seem content and serene, stress and worries carry with the wind. Every time I return it cleanses the soul, and opens the third eye. The feeling that there is not a care in the world seems to linger over. Sights of mountains to the east, and miles of beach to the west make you wonder how this place got here.
Give me more. I want strong descriptions that explode with images that use our senses to make us feel like we are at this place. I love some of your descriptions, "every time I return, it cleanses the soul, opens a third eye" but what does that mean? How does this timeless place do that? In what ways? Show me, don't just tell me.
ReplyDeleteThe beach is an amazing place. By reading what you wrote I was able to see you are talking about the 'third eye chakra.' Good description on that.
ReplyDeleteYour descriptions are very elegantly worded! The beach does tend to "cleanse the soul". I enjoyed your description of the third eye as well!
ReplyDeleteA great description that gives every aspect of feeling as though you're actually at the beach, as well as having no idea exactly where that beach is. It's almost like a vacation in a short story. Well done.
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